Tuesday, April 23, 2013

A Style That Kills Half The Message


Those who have an idea how a movement in the arts begins and develops know that it goes through several stages during which time each of the participating artists takes it a step further ahead till it reaches its ultimate form. It is then given a name such as Expressionism or Cubism or Modern, for example.

While this sort of development is associated with painting more than any other endeavor, it applies to the other forms as well, though in a less spectacular way. Sculpture goes through a similar evolution too, as does writing where for example; Classicism, Romanticism and Elizabethan make the list.

What is not yet taken seriously is the movement that has been developing in journalistic punditry over say, the past three decades. I do not have a name for what is developing; and there might not be one for several more decades. But what I can say with certainty is that a distinct movement is shaping, and Bret Stephens of the Wall Street Journal may become one of its leaders.

The reason why I bring this up is that Stephens took the movement a huge step further ahead while writing his most recent column. It has the title: “The Evil in Boston” and was published in the Journal on April 23, 2013. More than any time before, he comes out and serves notice that he has no use for a debate that will unfold in the style of the “give and take.” He will simply put his ideas down, and the reader will have to accept them as definitive and absolute. Otherwise, it's too bad for the reader, and that's that.

He begins by saying he saw human carnage; he understands it and has no words for it. He then gives a hint as to how he will frame this discussion. He does so starting with the proposition: “Before we move on from Boston.” He goes on to acknowledge six other topics he could have discussed before moving on to something else but neglects to discuss any of them. Instead, he demands that we: “remind ourselves what the [Boston] duo was up to on the afternoon of April 15, 2013.”

He does that by describing in detail the bombings that the Boston duo committed. He also probes their minds as they took the time, made the effort to build the bombs, took them to the place where they were to be detonated, placed them in their strategic positions “...then the explosions. And the panic. And the cascade of blood on the street.” He also reports on the description given by the hospital doctor who triaged the wounded victims that came in. This part reminded Stephens of his own experience when he saw the aftermath of a similar act a little more than ten years ago.

He then does something that reminds you, the reader, of the old saying: “War brutalizes some people and ennobles other people.” It is obvious that Bret Stephens was brutalized by his experience because what he does next is write the following: “That's why so much of the commentary about Boston seems so curiously off point.” In other words, he says that no commentary made previously could begin to compare with the commentary he just made. And no commentary after that is worth making.

To justify this last point, he mocks (1) the commentators who mentioned the role of the Twitter in the manhunt, (2) the commentators who spoke of the courage exhibited by the residents of Boston, (3) the commentators who delved into the alienation of young men. To end his presentation, he concedes that these points may be important “but … before you go into constructive mode, reflect on what has been destroyed … by whom?”

And this is where you see how false and empty is the movement that the new writing style represents. First, Bret Stephens mocks the commentators who spoke of the alienated young that committed the violent acts. He then urges the same commentators to reflect on those who committed the violent acts. He does it like someone totally oblivious of the fact that the alienated young committed the violence because the alienation played a role in motivating them.

It is evident that Stephens has difficulty accepting that people everywhere are made of the same genetic material. Were he to grasp this notion, he would have understood the argument that a violent act committed by one is as bad as a violent act committed by another one. Thus, he would have reasoned that someone seeing his mother or little sister blown up by a smart bomb dropped from a jet plane or a helicopter can be ennobled or brutalized the same as someone seeing a homemade bomb explode in the middle of a crowd.

When alienated in addition to that, either one of the two can go on to commit bad acts because violence begets violence – and that's a vicious cycle we can do without. To avoid it, we need to deescalate the conflict by reducing the differences between the antagonists whenever they appear on the scene.

To do this, we look at the two sides of the story by allowing the debate to go on unimpeded rather than kill the full message or kill half of it as suggested by Bret Stephens.